A very long time ago
love sank into my pillow.
A little part of this potion
gets into my head often.
But every time before today
the rest of it pulled it back
(This was the only good thing
about the good old rack.)
But today,
I'm overwhelmed.
S***
F***
J****
Stop. Stop.
How long would I
keep writing poems
out of thin air?
(keep writing poems)
out of thin air?
(keep writing poems)
out of thin air?
How long would I
keep writing poems
out of thin air?
(keep writing poems)
out of thin air?
(keep writing poems)
out of thin air?
August 20, 2008
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Vik
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6 comments:
Good to see you blurting out after a long!! You took more than a month for this one.
And if you cn write poems like this one out of thin air then carry on forever :)
Hey.... I jus noticed Geet-ik-blogger!! That is really sweet n intelligent too :) ;)
oh, you're back in this space ! i have to confess, reading urdu/hindi written in english taxes my poor brain so much, i can hardly appreciate the poetry on your other blog :(
but then, keep writing ! what is so special today that you're overwhelmed, by the way :)
p.s. ooh that rhymed !
Forever, I hope
Forever, I hope
Forever, I hope.
Love attacking from pillow...cool!
[Geetika]
Was quite free all this while.. and I only blog when I've no time for it. :D
A sweet blog attracted a sweet name I guess.. I didn't do much on my part. Phir bhi, thanks.. :)
[Phoenix, Geetika]
Forever, forever-- no, no! There should be some real experiences behind a poem. Like some real incidents, a real muse etc :P :P
[Pooja]
Interestingly, some say Hindi written in devnaagri is more difficult.. or, when written in english it's understood more widely! So please bear with it. :) And in any case, you always have this smart solution of investing your brain in Another Mortal Life. :P
Was just writing out of thin air, didn't I say! Nice rhyme, by the way.. :)
[vibhav]
I've ample reasons to suspect so. But yeah, cool it definitely is!
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