Version 1:
Tere na hone ka jo bhi Suboot rakhta hoo.n main
Kaise Usmein bhi tera wujood dhundh lete hain log!
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Version 2:
Kaise Usmein bhi Tera wujood dhundh lete hain log
- Tere na hone ka jo bhi suboot rakhta hoo.n main.
Which one sounds better?