Vo khayaal reh gaya uljha hi aaj bhi
Suljhaate huye jise kayi saal ho gaye
Na ye kashamkash nayi na hum naye
Naye magar fir bhi kayi bawaal ho gaye
Jaane faila jata hai ya simat raha ye shahar
Do lafzo.n pe yahaan chaar sawaal ho gaye
Kehte hum ab bhi wohi hain jo kehna chahein
Aur honge jo tere zaike ke pur-khyaal ho gaye
1 comments:
The rhyme works well! It is a qita (like a ghazal but without a matla).
The third sher is outstanding - what a play on words "do lafzon" "chaar sawaal"! And brining this in with the concept of phaila jaata ya simat raha shahar...that's novel. Well done!
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