main ashq teri aankh ka.. mujhe meri khata bata de
main ashq teri aankh ka.. mujhe meri khata bata de
ise nasamjhi kahoon teri.. ya kahoon tera deewanapan
dard diya kisi ne aur.. kisi ko nazaron se gira de
aankhon se dil mein utarna jaante honge bahot
meri tarah se koi dil se aankhon me utarkar dikha de
umra gham mein main.. chahe khushi mein chhalka
khud tune hi tha roka.. tera mann hai to baha de
tu uske liye ishq.. aur main tha ek moti
uske liye ab tu hi nahi.. meri hasti bhi mita de
tere dil ka vo ghar.. phir teri aankhon tak ka safar
aakhiri ehsaan ye kar.. apne gaalon pe hi sukha de
dost parakhne hain to aaj mehfil se munh naa pher
dhoondh vo jo dekhkar mujhe.. mera hamsafar baha de
aashiyano ki kami insaan ne kab mujhe hone di
tu bhi mujhe apne kisi dushman ka pata bata de
aadmi ko e khuda tune dee hai taqdeer bahut..
kabhi fursat mein ho to meri bhi maut bana de.
September 28, 2006
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splendid..
it's beens o much time since i read something so beautiful and touching..
Nice and touching. Achche alfaaz hain. I could feel 'ravaangii' (flow) missing at some places though.
aadmi ko e khuda tune dee hai taqdeer bahut..
kabhi fursat mein ho to meri bhi maut bana de.
Good lines.
@phoenix: thanx
@tapasya: thanx
u r right the flow is missing.
i was thinking of each doublet separately and didn't try much to integrate them.
heyy great one...simply beautiful :)...
makes me want to know u more as a person...hope to speak to u sometime on YM.do drop in ur id n il'l add u , if its fine wth u tht is ...tk care pal! :)
so nice of u to say so!
The real me might be very different from this blogger though. wud leave the id on ur blog.
looking forward to hear frm u :)
"i was thinking of each doublet separately and didn't try much to integrate them." ... I felt that
but it is brilliant, as it is
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