Gubaar hai, dhuaa.n hai, ya ye meri hi zindgaani hai
Kabhii nazar ka dhokha thii, ab aankh ka paani hai.
February 17, 2007
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It tried to be different.. couldn't do it any differently from others. Then it chose to be yet another face in the crowd; and soon, it realized it can make some difference.
Gubaar hai, dhuaa.n hai, ya ye meri hi zindgaani hai
Kabhii nazar ka dhokha thii, ab aankh ka paani hai.
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Vik
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2:06 PM
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Thats a wonderful couplet!
What shocks me, however, is the fact that a similar set of words came to us the same day, that too independently. Just a few minutes ago, I typed out a poem, published it, and then thought of checking your page, just the way I generally do. And I was indeed surprised.
And there's more to it: A couplet from my poem kind of completes your poem. Weird!
Chaar pal apni fitrat ke, jeekar meri palkon par
Beh jaanaa tu zindagii, farz teraa rawaani hai
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Wow! I'm surprized too!
But I think your couplet doesn't complete mine; you've written with quite different thoughts and it would've been clear if I had written a few more couplets. :)
But the couplet you mentioned here is a gem, best couplet of this particular effort of yours.
Looking at life at a separation looks a little dangerous at times.
[V]
Yeah, I agree.
But the irony is, it is separate. I can't help it.
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