March 20, 2009


Shikwah hai ik taraf to, ke koi samajhta nahi mujhe..
Aur ik taraf hai khauf ke koi samajh na jaaye.

Kashamkash-e-zindagi se yuun pyar ho chala hai..
Darta hoon uljhanein meri sulajh na jaayein.

Posted by .. Vik . at 8:19 PM

 

13 comments:

Bhushan said...

"Kashamkash-e-zindagi se yuun pyar ho chala hai..
Darta hoon uljhanein meri sulajh na jaayein."

nicely put ;)

Phoenix said...

Beautiful.
Echoes my feelings.

aditi said...

Very beautifully written:)

Realistic me... said...

=)
Bahut he umda!!

One more blogger said...

people are not happy either way u see :P :P jus kiddng.
nicely put :)

Tapasya said...

Beautiful.

Divesh said...

Uljhanon se to dosti kar hi li hai
Is khauf/darr ko bhi apna samajh ke dekh
Jo na zindagi jeene ka phir maza aa jaaye

Divesh said...

It is amazing how your thoughts find such an exact number of syllables to make them sound so good!

More more more!!!!

Vartika said...

"Shikwah hai ik taraf to, ke koi samajhta nahi mujhe..
Aur ik taraf hai khauf ke koi samajh na jaaye."

I think I speak for a lot of other readers such as myself...
very very very beautiful!

vibhav said...

Looks like Urdu captures contradictions and ironies really well, or Shers do...this was good!

Siyaah said...

Wonderful! One of your very best, both in style and content. The contradictions certainly define you, 'introvert blurting out'...

Anjali said...

wah wah :)

etherealspace said...

Shikwah hai ik taraf to, ke koi samajhta nahi mujhe..
Aur ik taraf hai khauf ke koi samajh na jaaye.

har pal mein jal-jal ke jeene ki ab aadat si ho gayi hai...
Darta hoon ki yeh aag kahin bujh naa jaayein...

:)

love the way you write and express!

 
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