Baat mere sawaal ki hai, ya,
Baat tere agar magar ki hai..
Kuchh mere dhadkte dil ki hai,
Kuchh teri jhuki nazar ki hai..
Mehsoos ki hai jo maine, keh de,
Toone bhi agar ki hai..
Baat teri meri na hokar
Kyun bas jamaane bhar ki hai..
Guzar to jaayegi yoon bhi
Baat to rehguzar ki hai..
...
Baat to asar ki thi
-Kuchh to asar ki hai..
September 11, 2011
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Vik
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Achhi baat hai...
Strangely, reading this I was reminded of "The Phone Call" (http://blurtingout.blogspot.com/2006/11/phone-call-part-i.html), and felt this poem would be a nice thing to say during that phone call.
Guzar to jaayegi yoon bhi
Baat to rehguzar ki hai..
bahut khoob...
Very spontaneous, very much in your writing style...!
[Phoenix]
Buri to nahi hai jaisi abhi hai,
baat baat mein kuchh kasar ki hai..
:)
[vibhav]
:)
For a comparison, let me say this one can be titled - "After A Lot of Phone Calls". :D
[kaayal, Siyaah]
Thanks!
after a long time...brilliant
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