I wanna talk to you,
and wanna talk to u too,
but not together.
You know me somewhat,
so I can be me with you,
but am I really that me?
Anyhow it doesn't matter
to you,
to me too
-though not absolutely.
U know me not yet,
I am just a face that
I am not sure u still recognise.
I am so bad at reading eyes.
But it does matter
not to u,
but me
-and too much at that.
I have got to be different
with you and u,
though I shouldn't be
-I always knew.
Let me just ask
-when are you and u
not together?
PS: Forgive me! It's like maintaining a public and personal blog on a common URL. One of the benefits of it is the restraint I am able to impose on myself (being aware of the public eye). Secondly, things half-said sound somewhat poetic. So plz bear with this!
January 12, 2007
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Why do you call it crap? Though I can't tell exactly what it was about, and it seems to be written on impulse, easily flowing, but still, does that make it bad? When you've put the label of poetry on it, why call it crap?
ooo hoo! I read that comment again, and it sounds as if I was angry or something, I think it turned out to be a little rude types, but it wasn't that serious!
Its some good poetry if you ask me. Not at all crap. I wonder who 'you' and 'u' are, and I wonder if they are the different aspects/moods of a single person.
[V]
Chill yaar! that wasn't any rude types. Infact u were appreciating the poem.
OK! I agree: crap is too bad a word for an otherwise average, impulsive post. May be I should remove the word.
[Taps]
I knew it can be interpreted this way.
Keep wondering!
Ab Main toh Khud se Bhagta sa nazar aata hoon
Khud se hi bichadne ki saza pata hoon
Roz bechta hoon khud ko main katra-2
Ab toh is aaine mein ek Chinar sa nazar aata hoon
[CK]
Welcome, sir!
Your lines are so close to my mood when I wrote this post! Nice words!
Thanks Dude
Par Tune mujhe sir kah kar utna hi dorr kar diya....plz call me Chetu
i can say only thing...keep talking..it turned ou great for readers like me !!!
[Chetu]
my apologies, sir ;) :D
[Desperado]
Thanx!
Thanks for writing this.
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