Maine phir se kuchh daastaanein likhi.n
Main phir se kuchh veerane dhoondhne chala..
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Ye befikri ka aalam, ye inteha-e-aawargi
Kabhi kabhi khuda bhi mujhse jalta to hoga.
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March 16, 2008
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Wah! Aapne socha ki bas do chheetein apni kalam se is blog par maar dete hain...baaki ki ghazal to log samajh hi lenge! :P
But liked them, especially the second one!
Subhan allah!
[Vibhav]
Actually I've been more busy reading your poetry these days. Likhne ki fursat hi nahi! It's like I'm watching the post-century part of a Sachin's inning. Keep the fours and sixes coming!
[Phoenix]
Aisi tamaam tareefaat ke liye hum ta-umr aapke shukr-guzaar rahenge!
saala picchli do-teen post se bada confusing blog ho gyaa hai...kafi kuch interpretation ke liye chod dete ho :D
waise pehli do lines meri exam state ke liye perfect hain...maine phir se kuch daastaanein likhin :P
[Desperado]
Yeayyy!! My poems ARE understandable. Just that nobody thinks that the meaning they 'seem' to convey IS what they have been about!
Appreciating poetry is all about a shared experience. ;)
ohh i have had my fair share of experience of filling sheets with junk :D
though what amazes me is when my friends can even fill up supplementary with crap too and i am at page two..lol
ahh lucky dude...it surely is bliss
in my case situation is quite different...nobody in my college listens to Nusrat..so i had to download and make my own collection...and its quite a decent one :)..though still not exhaustive due to space constraints
anyway..if you are my kind...ie willing to download...I'd be happy to provide you the download links...till den njoy in the Heaven :)
"Ye befikri ka aalam, ye inteha-e-aawargi
Kabhi kabhi khuda bhi mujhse jalta to hoga."
How optimistically beautiful!
[Desperado]
Wish you luck with the results.
[PCE]
Actually, more escapist (or say, an attempt to justify irresponsibility) than optimistic. Nevertheless it's equally important for me how YOU take it!
to think that someone would be jealous of you, as also to think that such escapism must bring someone's yearning for your position -sounds like optimism!
[Anupama]
I didn't disagree! :)
Let's drop both escapism and optimism. Can we agree on the phrase 'wishful thinking'?
(As a coincidence, you blogrolled me just when I was tagging somebody-who'd-blogroll-me-right-now . So I think you should do that tag!)
Loved them! The second of course totally stands out...
The second one is too good. Jab bhi koi awargi ki baat karta hai, pata nahi mujhe kya ho jaata hai...
and khuda mujhse jalta hoga...too good !! Amazingly original, I must add.
[Siyaah]
Thanks a lot!
[Taps]
Kya kahen cheez hi aisi hai aawargi!
I've encountered 4 fellow classmates in last one week, three of whom aren't into poetry or blogging, who talked to me about this she'r, with "you never told me you're a poet!", "tu to chhupa rustam nikla yaar!" etc. Thanks to Nikhil (u know.), I'm having some good publicity in college!
The second one is a gem. I become your fan for your writing this one. Both for the poetry and attitude :)
Thanks.. thanks a lot! That one happens to be by far the most appreciated she'r of mine so far :)
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