खयालों को लफ्जों में पिरो पाते हैं मुश्किल से,
पर कहा जब भी तुमसे कुछ.. हमने सब कहा दिल से।
April 5, 2008
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It tried to be different.. couldn't do it any differently from others. Then it chose to be yet another face in the crowd; and soon, it realized it can make some difference.
खयालों को लफ्जों में पिरो पाते हैं मुश्किल से,
पर कहा जब भी तुमसे कुछ.. हमने सब कहा दिल से।
Posted by ..
Vik
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11:42 AM
7 comments:
[clap clap]
this is for both your posts.
sometimes it's just better to leave it short (at two/four) lines.
It's more crisp and one can avoid falling into the pit of Compromise between length and quality.
Waah!!!
Nice couplet with a dangerous possible meaning!
Reading you for quite some time. You write well :)
[Geetanjali]
Thanks!
I agree, but I'd have to admit that an apparent scarcity of time is also playing a major role here. :)
[RM....]
Shukriya!!
[Vibhav]
Guess you're not talking about anatomical terms like brain, tongue and heart..? Or was it about unrequited love?.. No sir.
[aknownim]
Thanks.
no no, this time it sounded to me like you're taking a break, with "That's all..." together with "खयालों को लफ्जों में पिरो पाते हैं मुश्किल से"...so...
but dangerous was an extreme word!
I must say you understand my hazy words pretty well! In fact not only this couplet, but also the previous one, and also the one with "kabhi yaaro.n zindagii mein kho jaayein jo hum kahii.n", and also the one with "chand alfaz dil se dikalte hain kabhi kabhii", were also an expression of desire to go slow on the addictive blogging among other things. :)
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